What happens when your brain realises you've been taking the wrong tack and completely switches out a scene in favour of something else. You lose ~4000 worth of words. ARGH.
But the replacement should flow better...
( I changed the location and time and timing of the scene, so this is no longer in the story; but I liked this bit... )
Nearly there. So very nearly there!
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neptune47 is my artist and she is AMAZING. I'm just sayin'!
But the replacement should flow better...
( I changed the location and time and timing of the scene, so this is no longer in the story; but I liked this bit... )
Nearly there. So very nearly there!
Also:
neptune47 is my artist and she is AMAZING. I'm just sayin'!