"John stayred at Tayla, wanting to no wen he could get anuther minute alone with her so he could tell her how he really felt that he luved her and wanted to mary her and!"
The saddest thing? I'm tempted to ask if someone actually wrote this as the opening sentence to their story...and afraid of the answer.
You offered to review the story; that's 'feedback' to me. Heck, a four word comment - "I liked your story" - is feedback.
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The saddest thing? I'm tempted to ask if someone actually wrote this as the opening sentence to their story...and afraid of the answer.
You offered to review the story; that's 'feedback' to me. Heck, a four word comment - "I liked your story" - is feedback.