Finally back online to read this! First off thank you taking the time to do a pinch hit..you didn't have to. What I love about this was the imagery, your stories have a really nice feel of realism to them. The crashed jumper, the dead solider and Teyla's practically of using his things in a time of crisis. There was no woobyfiying of characters..Teyla knew exactly what to do...John endured the pain, using the plastic bit, everything just felt real....like a well written episode. Then that ending with the artillery...
But you tricked me! I had no idea this was a wip which I avoid at all costs so, I will hunt you down if you don't finish it. *she says nicely *
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But you tricked me! I had no idea this was a wip which I avoid at all costs so, I will hunt you down if you don't finish it. *she says nicely *