Ouch! I hurt for John, what a painful realization -- coming in second place in a race you didn't realize you were in. Nicely done, I liked the tone and pace of the story -- it flows very well. John's voice rings true-to-character and you've done Ronon justice as well.
Of course in my mind, eventually Teyla realizes she's just settling for Hiren because she doesn't think she can have John. She and John come clean about their feelings for each other and live happily ever after, but that's just me!
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Of course in my mind, eventually Teyla realizes she's just settling for Hiren because she doesn't think she can have John. She and John come clean about their feelings for each other and live happily ever after, but that's just me!
~ Kim