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(Anonymous)
Thursday, August 17th, 2006 05:19 pm (UTC)
So very well done! Lighthearted and a fun read but with some serious undertones. So many things stood out for me: the hamali fruit and John using Teyla's fondness for it to tease Rodney; Teyla's treatment of Captain Kilmer when it is obvious he has issues with her; axe vs. the skinning knife; Teyla figuring out how to find Ronon using the comm. system; the techs discussing the Atlantis influence on Ronon and Teyla; Teyla not having someone do what she would not do, unless she could not do it; Sheppard and the cuffs.

And I LOVE these lines -

"Hurt him, and seven years running from the Wraith will be nothing in comparison to what I will do to you."

"Perhaps she would outclass him instead."

"You know, he caught me by surprise."

"Me, Teyla; you, John." -- priceless, just priceless!

I'd love to be a fly on the wall during the post-mission briefing for this -- especially John's expression when he finds out what Teyla said to Ronon.

Thanks for sharing this!

~Kim

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