Wednesday, April 25th, 2007 10:10 am
This is my "Say You, Say Me" challenge!

Write an Atlantis ficlet: 100-500 words - any character, any story idea - and I will write you one back, 'remixing' it in the process.

Only one ficlet per person.
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Wednesday, April 25th, 2007 01:58 am (UTC)
Oh, I'm so sorry for the crapness of this... Not even 100 words! :-S

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Watching John was one of her most favourite secret things to do.

Teyla smiled as she watched the diverse emotions play across John’s face. So many different combinations. Hopeful followed but sadness quickly changed to pain then unbridled joy. Anger that lead to rage only to be replaced by utter disbelief. Depths of depression turning to moments of ecstasy in the blink of an eye.

Watching John watch football was one of most favourite secret things to do.
Wednesday, April 25th, 2007 03:43 am (UTC)
it's over 400 words. :x

Although Atlantis has a zoology division, only Dr. Nolan had enough experience as a vet to properly examine the dog currently sitting in on the examination bed in front of her. She took her stethoscope off and turned to the group standing behind her, fiddling with the buttons on her lab coat as she explained.

"Well, Dr. Weir, I really don't know what to say about Colonel Sheppard other than he's in perfect health for a dog and I don't see a reason to keep him in the infirmary. I'm releasing him to your team's care." She turned back to the bed and waved her hand. "All right, Colonel. You can get off the bed now. I'm sending you back to your team."

John leaped off the bed, and trotted over to his team with his tail wagging, turned his head to Elizabeth and let out a whine. She sighed and looked to them. "You're free to go, but I expect one of you to check in every so often to make sure he's fine. In the meantime, Major Lorne will take over Colonel Sheppard's duties for the time being."

John barked happily and trotted out of the infirmary with his team behind him.

*

As the days passed, a routine had been settled into as to who was watching the Colonel through out the day. Ronon would take him running through the city and training with the Marines, after which John would spend time in Rodney's lab keeping watch over the scientists and occasionally barking to keep them on their toes. After that, he would spend the rest of the day lying at Teyla's side as she meditated.

There were several arguments that broke out over the Colonel. What breed he was (a cross between a German Shepherd and an Alaskan Malamute, according to Dr. Keltie, who studied dog breeds in her spare time), whose quarters was he sharing with (Teyla's because she woke up to a whine outside and when she let him in, he plopped down next to her bed and fell asleep), what food was okay to feed (chocolate and coffee no, near-deer bones yes), who was walking and cleaning up after him (whoever was watching him at the time, which meant Rodney could not call Teyla or one of the Marines to do so just because he didn't want to) and does he understand everyone around him (the answer was yes because he growled at Rodney when Rodney made a flippant remark about him.)
Wednesday, April 25th, 2007 07:04 am (UTC)
Damn, that's a good idea. However, I have never been able to write fiction, so I'll just watch the comments pile up. :) Good luck!
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Wednesday, April 25th, 2007 06:42 pm (UTC)
I’m neither good nor am I a prolific writer, but at times I have these whole conversations and scenes between Teyla and John going on in my head. They’re never enough to be a whole fic not even a coherent drabble, but they’re like these little intense moment of natural interaction between these two, and since I’m such a monogamous shipper these moments only consist of these two. This is going to be anonymous because I don’t have the guts to put my name to it.


With anticipation John watches as her thighs part slowly of there own accord.

Was this an invite? An invitation to him to not only take what he wanted, but to take it all.

The delicate musk of her arousal was the little push needed to shatter what little bit of control he had left, he is driven now, by the primal need to claim her, to erase all doubts in her mind as to who is the conqueror and the conquered.

But then, there has always been something about Teyla that compels him to open all doors and let her in. Could it be, because she radiates so much natural energy, warmth, and curiosity, or because she is all heat and fire, a heat that slowly warms him and awakens his need, and fire that burns him and ignite his passion?
Wednesday, April 25th, 2007 10:33 pm (UTC)
A pinch hit, tiny. I'm off to bed but you've amazed me with the other stories and I wanted to see what you could do with this.

Teyla wakes up alone. Little beams of sun are lighting up her face and she stretches pleasurably. The night is over and she’s ready to start the day.

She feels like being silly, irreparably, irredeemably silly. Like running through the halls or laughing out loud for no apparent reason. For once life is good, simple. No Wraith for a long time, her people’s first harvest is coming up and for now, everything’s right in Teyla-world.

She dances around a bit and follows by a few simple kata moves. She feels in control of her body, strong and able. And silly.

The feeling lasts till she opens her door and steps into the corridor. There’s an emergency in the control room and her capable self takes over once again as she rushes to offer her services. She faintly wonders when she’ll feel that way again, let alone get to enjoy it.