beta?

Is there anyone on the friends list willing to beta a 10,000 word crackerrific AU in the next 24 hours? It's Teyla/Lorne NC-17 with John/Teyla UST.

I have a beta who knows about the universe I'm blending with; but I need someone who doesn't know, just so I can see if I've managed to make sense with it.

Drop a comment ASAP, pls?

fic: Servant of Naamah: Virgin-Price - NC-17 [Teyla/Lorne, Teyla/John UST]

TITLE: Servant of Naamah: Virgin-Price
CATEGORY: Crackfic, smutfic, crackfic, crackfic...did I mention the crackfic?
WORD COUNT: 10,800
RATING: NC-17
NOTES: Stargate Atlantis melded with the world created in Jacqueline Carey's Kushiel Trilogy (Wiki entry link here). I'm thinking of this story as my Terre d'Atlantis. If you liked 'To Serve A Queen' then this is probably right up your alley. I've used 'Marc' as Major Lorne's first name - I don't know if he's been given a name in canon, but that's the one I seem to end up using for him: a nice, solid name.

Many thanks to my betas, allisnow, ladyjax, and majorsamfan for advice, suggestions, and picking apart. It was appreciated.

I don't know what it is about sga_flashfic that gets the insanity happening, but four of my five crackfics have been prompted by their challenges. I was planning to sit this challenge out, too. Oy.

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It is said that there is no time so dangerous for a new-made adept as the fortnight before the eve of the new-made adepts' debut.

Some lessons are learned the hard way.