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I'd like a second opinion on my SGA Big Bang plot, please. John/Teyla pairing, John-centric with strong Teyla, team, John-whump, and John-angst angles. Also contains John/other and Teyla/other dynamics.
Mostly, I want someone to point out the plotholes and possibly help me brainstorm ways to spak-fill them in if they're not something I can't get past with a bit of handwaving.
Please leave an email at which I can contact you, although it would be awesome if you had AIM, Yahoo, or MSN - I prefer real-time communication to emailing back and forth.
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Mostly, I want someone to point out the plotholes and possibly help me brainstorm ways to spak-fill them in if they're not something I can't get past with a bit of handwaving.
Please leave an email at which I can contact you, although it would be awesome if you had AIM, Yahoo, or MSN - I prefer real-time communication to emailing back and forth.
Responses are screened.