Oh my good god this was amazing. You managed to compact so much richness and depth and growth and change into a remarkably short and economic piece, without sacrificing a single thing or leaving the reader feeling like you were jumping over key points. The characterizations were great, too. My only complaint comes from the whumper in me, who would have enjoyed a few more details, but in honesty, the lover of literature in me sees that there was little room in this piece for gratuity, and the details would have taken away from its pace and tone. Fantastic :D
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