I found I was expecting to read the horrid details of the whumping but then it was the end and I didn't miss them. You gave us the most important parts of what happened to John in these incredibly amazing glimpses and reactions.
LOVE LOVE LOVE the Rodney and John shooting range scene.
Wonderfully done with Teyla and Ronon handling Richard.
*sob* the closet sleeping.
*sniff and grin* sleeping with Torren.
Amazing the fight/test with Amelia (so glad you included her).
Deliciously written, practically perfect in every way.
incredible...
LOVE LOVE LOVE the Rodney and John shooting range scene.
Wonderfully done with Teyla and Ronon handling Richard.
*sob* the closet sleeping.
*sniff and grin* sleeping with Torren.
Amazing the fight/test with Amelia (so glad you included her).
Deliciously written, practically perfect in every way.
Tracy_TheEverPresentNaggingOne