I left the whumping out of the story because I felt it would be better to simply hint at it rather than state it outright. The audience could fill in the blanks as they wanted and I wouldn't have to deal with John's torture, just the aftermath.
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Thank you for reading and leaving a comment, and I'm pleased that you like the body of my work!