Wow. This is beautifully written. The sadness and loneliness in John and how what breaks him is his isolation from Teyla even when he is alone with her....I love how slowly you build it all, hiding beneath the surface of the shopping visit and apprehension of the thief. It broke my heart. The hopeful line of how he is going to try to make do at the end made it all the more devastating and made me cry. Bravo.
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