Oh, this is so lovely! Wonderful ideas with all the different goodbyes and the things that the team members keep to remind them of each other. I like how you dance around the edges of each scene, giving us enough but leaving us wanting more. Especially favorite bits: the symmetry of the Satedan beads (with their "shorthand" markings) vis-a-vis the initials on the handle of the knife; the appropriateness of Teyla being given dog tags; and the way that the goodbye scenes are woven into and around the goodbye scenes that we saw in the episode.
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Wonderful job!