I really, really liked this! I particularly like Caldwell, and I think you got his voice down absolutely perfectly here, mannerisms and speech patterns and everything. Very well done!
It's rare that I've read a story with an open ending and not been very, very frustrated--not that I'm not a little frustrated, mind!--but here, I really felt... peace. Like it almost wasn't my business to know more. It was very subtly done, and I really enjoyed the story arc!
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It's rare that I've read a story with an open ending and not been very, very frustrated--not that I'm not a little frustrated, mind!--but here, I really felt... peace. Like it almost wasn't my business to know more. It was very subtly done, and I really enjoyed the story arc!