The scene in the beginning with John in the tava bean field (remembering Teyla's face) stands out to me, particularly because of the vivid imagery. Did you always plan to have that scene included in the story (seems like it, since it's so important), or how did you develop it?
How did you come up with Ivali's character (and her name)? It seems like you would have felt the need to create her because John needed some kind of support apart from his team when he was trying to find himself. So, did Ivali change much from how you originally imagined her, and if so, how much?
What are some of the scenes that required major rewriting, as you mentioned in your journal posts about the progress of your story? Why did you have to rewrite them?
The UST between John & Teyla - Was is always meant to be unresolved, or did you decide upon it over the course of writing the story?
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How did you come up with Ivali's character (and her name)? It seems like you would have felt the need to create her because John needed some kind of support apart from his team when he was trying to find himself. So, did Ivali change much from how you originally imagined her, and if so, how much?
What are some of the scenes that required major rewriting, as you mentioned in your journal posts about the progress of your story? Why did you have to rewrite them?
The UST between John & Teyla - Was is always meant to be unresolved, or did you decide upon it over the course of writing the story?
That's all I got for now. ;)