fic: Thinking When You Shouldn't - NC-17

[tielan]

TITLE: Thinking When You Shouldn't
SUMMARY: There are times when one should not be thinking anything.
CATEGORY: PWP, John/Teyla, drabble
RATING: NC-17
SPOILERS: Itsy-bitsy one for Sateda. Blink and you'll miss it.
NOTES: allisnow pestered me for smut. So she gets smut. Precisely 100 words of it! Also fulfills the fanfic100 prompt #23 - Lovers

Thinking When You Shouldn't

John claimed he was not good at feelings.

Given how his erection throbs in her palm (hot, heavy, swollen) Teyla does not think it is the feelings with which he has trouble.

Given how his mouth moves across her breasts (teasing, tonguing, tasting) she does not think that he is bad at expressing those feelings.

Given how her flesh gives way to his (penetrated, claimed, possessed), how her mouth finds his (eager, needy, open), how his body and mind feels in hers (god, teyla, you're beautiful), she does not think at all.

Pleasure swallows her, and all thought goes away.

- fin -

Comments

[goddess09807.livejournal.com]

This is *such* a wonderful way to wake up.

I love this.

[allisnow.livejournal.com]

Yay smut!

Thanks sweetie ;)

[majortrip.livejournal.com]

Hurrah for smut!

*needs a drink now*

[madjm.livejournal.com]

Amazing how 100 words can say so much. :) Really nice job!

[purple-cube.livejournal.com]

I have to learn to stop checking LJ at lunchtime - I couldn't get any work done in the afternoon after I'd read this. Very, very hot :)

[(Anonymous)]

Wow! So much said in so few words, well done!

~ Kim

[larian.livejournal.com]

Yummy. Great afternoon break!