colouring exercise: Marvel AU

[tielan]

If I could get Rodney and Ronon done in time, I'd sub it for the team_sga challenge.

Preview:




(It's a Marvel AU: John goes Bug, Teyla phases like Shadowcat and has latent empathic skills. Go read my fic "Living With It" for the basics.

The original sketch is in this post. I took Rodney and Ronon out for this version to simplify the layout (and so I wouldn't have so much to colour).

Praise? Concrit?

I know that the foreshortening on John's arm isn't very good - I have to work on my foreshortening skills. How about the colouring? The layout/design? The hair??

Comments

[tielan]

Clearly, my muscle definition sucks. And the pose probably doesn't help either.